Making Tracks
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Early morning I go
Into deep snow
Traversing woods aglow
Wondering what is below
Grateful the going is slow
Appreciating the show.
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(A Monorhyme Poem)
Making Tracks
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Early morning I go
Into deep snow
Traversing woods aglow
Wondering what is below
Grateful the going is slow
Appreciating the show.
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(A Monorhyme Poem)
Cute! Actually, I uploaded a ‘Monorhyme’ poem of my own onto my blog a few days ago. It’s linked below. I’d love it you read over it and gave me some advice on how to improve or on what you think of the poem, because you’re a very talented writer. Thank you!
https://poeticaparadisum.wordpress.com/2018/04/29/stagelike-thrills-monorhyme/
Hi there. Thanks for the kind words! It’s fun to try all these types of forms – have you tried others hat have challenged you?
I like your poem. I like how it reads and is written. The idea of unleashing the crowd from its cage through poetry and the reference to humble beginnings are excellent. Thank you so much for sharing with me.
Thank you so much for reading! I have attempted many forms already, but I would love if you would pose challenges for me to write.